Erin McDaniel
Professor Corbally
English 203
April 8, 2010
Satire in Lysistrata 
What separates a run-of-the-mill parody from an effective satire is that a satire has teeth. While both genres poke fun at absurdities, satire uses a calculated formula that attacks societal injustice and inequality to launch “a critique of humanity and human institutions, in hopes of promoting general awareness and positive change” (Harmon and Holman 461). A Saturday Night Live parody sketch, for example, might use exaggeration (caricature) to get a quick laugh at the expense of a political candidate, but the laugh is not likely to cause deep thought and change. But a satire, such as Jonathan Swift’s “A Modest Proposal” often uses absurd suggestions (he tells his congregation, this was originally a sermon, that the solution to the poverty in his native Ireland is for the poor to breed and sell their nicely-fattened babies as tasty meat for English consumption) to generate thought, even outrage (his suggestion was that the English were, figuratively, cannibalizing Ireland at the time; he hoped to cause change by shocking his readers). In the 5th Century BC, the Greek playwright Aristophanes used satire to generate laughter and to try to cause change. On the surface Aristophanes’s Lysistrata is a farcical tale about women using their sexual appeal to get what they want.  Beneath the outrageous suggestions and bawdy humor, though, the play is an attempt to cause change in the Athenian people, to get them to see that the Peloponnesian War-era government and military leaders were acting foolishly and that even if extreme measures were needed, Athens must work to end this generations-long war.
The crux of Aristophanes satirical strategy is carried out in the absurd situation that provides the backdrop for his play. Lysistrata casts her fellow women of Athens as shallow plebeians who have no interest in civic affairs. When they fail to gather promptly at the Acropolis for a serious discussion about the war, she becomes frustrated: “If they’d been summoned to worship the God of Wine, or Pan, or to visit the Queen of Love, why, you couldn’t have pushed your way through the streets for all the timbrels” (Aristophanes 396). Lysistrata has little faith in the women of Athens, so she appeals to their baser instincts rather than try to engage them in a political dialogue. 
Tell me: don’t you yearn for the fathers of your children, who are away at the wars? I know you all have husbands abroad…And as for lovers, there’s not even a ghost of one left. Since the Milesians revolted from us, I’ve not even seen an eight-inch dingus to be a leather consolation for us widows. Are you willing, if I can find a way, to help me end the war? (Aristophanes 399)
The absurdity of Lysistrata asking her womenfolk to join her in resisting a legitimate armed conflict just one line after bemoaning the dearth of eight-inch leather dildos is glaring. Aristophanes is poking fun at sexual desire, military culture and the motivations of married women in one incongruous speech. But this mix has a strategic intention. Lysistrata’s proposal to withhold sexual graces to end the Peloponnesian conflict belittles the significance of war in general, as if something as serious as a war could be solved with something as frivolous as sexual abstinence. Lysistrata delights in the possibility: “My goodness, yes! If we sit at home all rouged and powdered, dressed in our sheerest gowns, and neatly depilated, our men will get excited and want to take us; but if you don’t come to them and keep away, they’ll soon make a truce” (Aristophanes 400).   The notion, like Swift’s ironic proposal to breed babies as a food source, is absurd.  Women held no political power in ancient Athens;  they also were subject to rough handling by their husbands (there were no courts protecting women from spousal abuse); this whole idea is a fantasy.  
Aristophanes makes this fantastic suggestion seem more reasonable than the childishness of the men in the play.  The strength of  Lysistrata as a satirical work lies in a clear target (foolhardy men in an endless war) being mocked through  outrageous suggestion and exaggeration . Aristophanes makes women the heroes, men the objects of folly and likens military combat, presumably an honorable and worthwhile masculine pursuit, to a childish game.

	NOTE:  this is a bit less than ½ of the entire essay; the finished paper is five pages
	in MLA format (with 1” margins, double spacing, not BEFORE / AFTER spacing, 
	heading, headers, title, etc.).  The entire paper continues to look at the one thesis
point—the use of satire to ridicule a nation that refuses to end a foolish war—in the play, and the student continues to support her observations with both documented  quotations from the play and explanations of those quotations.